A general purpose thread for people interested in writing for fun or profit.
Post drafts or links and ask for feedback! Argue semantics! Inoculate your chickens against evil!
1.) In any post for critiques, I think you need to specify whether you'd a.) like to receive criticism, and b.) whether you'd like that criticism privately or publicly. It'd be lousy to have someone posting something they just want to have read only to have someone publicly rip into it.
2.) Would it be easier and more readable if writing was linked to (like a Google doc) rather than posted directly?